Among the many reasons to
appreciate David’s latest tome is that the poetry offers a feeling of a long
walk with a close observer. His poems follow the sun, study the natural world,
and comment with incisive wit on the background noise of social and political
happenings. While he avoids heavy handed didactics, his images are instructive.
In poem (10) “. . . Another slice falls / from the Earth: a forest disappears,”
and later in the same poem, “. . . The circling hawk can’t find / the bough he
perched on yesterday.” Most wonderfully, David’s work employs humor, often with
a bite. In poem (13) he considers the instructions for assembling his day, “. .
. There’s a handle / and a washer and flowers and / weeds and religions and
opinions / and the print with deceptions / is as small as that for truth.” David’s
eye for details reveals a mind of nesting dolls where ironies and inferences
join hands and allow readers to draw their own conclusions: “the universe
expands, the noonday sun / turns cartwheels over / the golf course pond. The
unemployment / rate comes down, goes up, / and the hourly rate / for leisure
stays the same” (15). In (17) he writes “. . . The ocean / can’t cough up the
plastic.” And later in the same poem, “. . . We’d put ice / on the wounds, but
it’s melting / fast and depression / moves into its place.”
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Throughout the book, David’s
poems, for the most part, begin with simple sentences, an actor acting (“The
night sky peels away,” “The light cuts,” “The sky drinks,”), and once the
reader is anchored within an action, he introduces a blend of characters and a
dynamic setting where disparate images often encounter one another, as in (19):
“Today weighs lightly on the mountain’s back / A thrasher on the mailbox /
waits for the news. / The trees along the street soak up / what light remains /
now that starlings have stripped / the feeder to its metal frame / and the
president is lonely / with nothing but his power / for company.” These are poems that simultaneously take us
everywhere while remaining grounded in the passing seasons of the desert. The
problem with reviewing David’s book is that there is so much to want to share,
phrases where one stops reading to linger on the moment, “On the country music
station / the singer has a voice / covered in sequins . . .” (21); “History has
granted / no charity / while the moon on the night / horizon is a coin /
rolling in a metal begging bowl” (28); “. . . It doesn’t matter / which party
is in power, / they pledge allegiance with their noses / to the prevailing
winds” (34). As the poems move through the seasons, the natural world and news
events, we experience a year in review, one very like our own thinking
processes as the poems look everywhere and create contexts within contexts. In
one poem, David considers the carcass of a coyote, its surprising smallness
when viewed up close, and in the next poem (89), “. . . The supermarket shelves
cry / Freedom! While the Senate / convenes to decide / who it’s for.”
Taken as a whole, David Chorlton’s Speech Scroll offers a
poetic journal of higher innocence that travels a circuit between the noise of
the world and the silent vacancy that is his ultimate source. Perhaps that
explains the haiku incisiveness of his observations and the moments of Zen laughter
that his works evoke in this reader. With that, I’ll allow David the final
word:
(74)
Reading an American poet who’s
reading a Chinese poet
who reads only the sky; where
does it end? May as well
go straight to the source,
that vacancy where everything
begins.
Also by David Chorlton: Gilded Snow: the poems of Raissa Parnok
Greg Gibert is the author of Afflatus.
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